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 Uchiha Naoe Kanetsugu (WIP)

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Nat_Naoe
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PostSubject: Uchiha Naoe Kanetsugu (WIP)   Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:32 pm

Name: (Personal Name) Uchiha Naoe Kanetsugu
Nickname:
Age: 11
Date of Birth: 10/12
Chinese Zodiac: (it can also be found on google that your Chinese Zodiac sign correlates to your age. So whatever year of the Zodiac would make him 11 is what he is.) Ram (if you don't care about consistency with the actual Zodiac)
Gender: Male
Clan: Uchiha

Looks: Naoe is a 5'5'' tall sickly looking child. He weighs 110 lbs and has an even muscular build of a well trained ninja. He often wears clothing that is suited for the gusty weather of the Land of Fire, but is comfortable in his ninja uniform most of the time. He wears clothing that maintains his body heat as he is not the hardiest of children. His expressions tend to be very demure like the rest of the Uchiha, but he is much more prone to cracking a smile and giving friendly gestures to others. When he is focusing on his expression, it often forms a well defined smile.



Personality: Naoe enjoys reading and studying but also a good work out. He spends most of his free time alone and doesn't necessarily enjoy the company of others. He uses poor judgement in deciding what to say to others which leads them to not like him. He is rude and curt but not by choice. He is indecisive with most things and often waffles between decisions, even if they are important ones. His favorite food is eel and his least favorite is curry. He loves sunny weather.

Clan Information

(Regular Uchiha Clan info)

Clan Name: Uchiha
Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan (Copy Wheel Eye)- 2 tomo in each eye
Clan Symbol: The traditional flame fan two sections, one red, one white.
Clan History:
The Uchiha clan descended from the elder of the two sons entrusted by the Sage of the Six Paths with his power and will. When it came time for the Sage to chose a successor, he questioned the two on what course of action they would follow to bring order to the world. The elder believed that might was the way to bring peace, while the younger believed love was the way. The Sage favoured the ideal of the younger brother, and therefore designated the younger as his successor, causing the elder to be filled with jealousy and hatefulness. From the younger boy descended the Senju clan who would be the eternal rivals of the Uchiha.

Before the founding of the ninja villages, the Uchiha were one of the many mercenary clans for hire. Because of their Sharingan, the Uchiha clan came to be known as one of the two strongest clans, the second being the Senju clan. Madara Uchiha was particularly powerful, and, upon attaining the Mangekyō Sharingan, he took control of the clan. Under his leadership the Uchiha grew stronger, conquering whatever clans they came upon, such that, whenever the Uchiha clan was hired for a job, the opposing side would hire the Senju.

Hashirama Senju, the leader of the Senju clan, grew tired of the endless fighting, and approached the Uchiha clan with a peace treaty. Madara feared that an alliance would lead the Uchiha to ruin, but his clan disagreed, and he was forced to accept. The two clans came together to form Konoha, with Hashirama being selected as Hokage. Madara believed that this was proof that the Uchiha would be made subservient to the Senju, but his clan saw this only as his attempt to rekindle the flames of war. They turned their backs on him, and he defected. Following Madara's betrayal, the Second Hokage gave the Uchiha control of the Konoha Military Police Force as a sign of trust. According to Madara, this was really just a way of keeping the Uchiha in check and out of Konoha's governing affairs. Over the years, some Uchiha, such as Setsuna, have figured out this motive's true meaning, and tried to rebel against the village as Madara did, but they find that it was too little, too late to make a difference, as the Senju had already completely suppressed the Uchiha.
Link: (this is the link for your approved clan)

Rank Information
Rank: Genin
Village: Konoha

Skill Information
Skill Speciality:
Main: Seal Specialist
Sub: Elementalist
Elemental Affinity: Katon, Fuuton
Special Characteristics: His parents were always too busy to teach him how to properly socialize. Therefore, he spent his first few years of the academy not worrying about social matters, and learning to work quickly with his hands. He can form handseals on an almost Jonin level. While he has discovered that he has an affinity for Fuuton techniques, he has yet to find a teacher who is capable of teaching him to utilize it.

Jutsus
(please note: use the same template for every jutsu)

Name: Kokohi no Jutsu – False Place Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Duration: Until Kai is used, or the person realizes they’re under the Genjutsu.
Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object.

Name: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Duration: Until Kai is used, or the person realizes they’re under the Genjutsu.
Description: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.

Name: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu - Sly Mind Affect Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Duration: Until Kai is used.
Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.

Name: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Duration: Until Kai is used.
Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.

Name: Konoha Kage Buyou
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Description: A technique often used after Shoufuu, the user will move at high speeds below an opponent as they're in the air, as if becoming their shadow. Because the move is used so quickly after the enemy is launched into the air, it gives them no time to counter, allowing the user to proceed to strike with ease.

Name: Shikoku Fuuin
Rank: C
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: -
Description: Shikoku Fuuin is a Fuuinjutsu technique used by the Leaf Sannin Jiraiya. By forming the needed sealing chakra on his finger, Jiraiya can engrave a message into an object.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Name: Genjutsu Kai
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.

Name: Endan - Fireball
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows Jiraiya to emit a jet of fire from his mouth. While not stated, this is probably the same or a similar jutsu to the one Jiraiya uses in conjunction with Gamebunta to do Gamayu Endan.

Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.

Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.

Name: Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: none
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.

Name: Nan Kaizou - Soften Modification
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Element: none
Description: Nan Kaizou is a Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to make their body very malleable. It was originally developed for spying activities. This technique can be done after surgery and actual body modification. When used the ninja can stretch and twist their body at any angle, allowing them to surprise their opponent.

Name: Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi - Sharingan Windmill Triple Blade
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Uchiha clan. Using the developed vision of the Sharingan eye, the clan member hurls three Windmill Shuriken which have wire attached. While in the air the clan member can manipulate wire to make the blades circle the target, which results in the attached wire binding them.



Styles

Weapons
20 Shuriken
2 Fuma Shuriken
2 reels of razor wire
4 finger guards

History and Roleplay Sample
History:
Pre Academy Arc-
Naoe was born to two members of the Konoha police force and lived in the Uchiha compound in Konoha. As a small child he always wanted siblings, but his parents' busy schedule did not allow for this to happen. The children of the Uchiha clan did not necessarily warm to those who their parents were not friends with. Therefore Naoe spent much of his childhood alone studying ninja techniques. He watched and learned from all of the members of the clan in order to better understand the ninja world. In particular, he watched the members of the police force, hoping to be like his father in the future. He often used his time alone to learn jutsu ahead of time, and was already familiar with the techniques learned in the academy by the time he was 5. Many thought that this was due to him being a genius, but it was only due to his hard work. He was learning C ranked jutsu by the time he entered the academy. His family had a dog named Shimaru and they loved him dearly, but when Naoe was 4 years old, the dog died.

Academy Arc and Sharingan-
When Naoe reached the age where he would enter the academy, he was only slightly aquainted with the other Uchiha children. Other than that, he did not know any of the Konoha children his age. Regardless of this though, he was always warm and welcoming. The other children had already formed friendships though, so for the most part he was left to his own devices. His main goal was to learn what the academy had to offer, but he was always open to the formation of new friendships. These never came though.
One day, while on his way to the academy, Naoe stumbled upon a dispute between two chunnin level ninja. The arguement soon degenerated into violence and Naoe's curiosity did not allow him to simply leave the scene. After a few moments, one of the ninja gained the upper hand and felled his opponent. Naoe made a noise in the alleyway as he attempted to slip off quickly, and the Chunnin threw a kunai directly at the unsuspecting academy student. This is when Naoe's Sharingan evolved. With the two tomoe in his eyes, he was able to dodge the projectile. The older ninja then attempted to strike Naoe with a fireball, fearing that the young boy would tell about his crime. As the Gokakyou no jutsu formed, Naoe used his newfound sharingan abilities, as well as his superior seal speed to beat the chunin to the punch. Naoe had officially won his first ninja battle, as the startled chunin fled the scene.
Days later, Naoe completed the academy, and now sets out to join the ninja world as a genin.

Rp Sample:
::The sun rose over the Uchiha compound and the first signs of life could be seen in the community. Fires were started, beds were vacated, and eyes were opened as the Uchiha clan stirred for their activities. Naoe awoke to the gentle sound of others in the compound waking up. His house was already empty of course. His parents awoke before anyone else in order to assemble at the precinct. They were on the police force after all and had things to do in order to keep the people safe. He quietly moved into the kitchen and began to cook his breakfast. There were eggs already laid out on the table and he quickly cracked and scrambled them. He was not one to linger inside when there was a nice day outside. Today was his first day as a genin. He had been training for this for his entire life. Of course, he had trained a little longer than most others had. He'd never really had friends or family to otherwise occupy his attention. His eggs still sizzled as he scooped them into his mouth. He ate his breakfast quickly, even though it was hot. It was no different than the flames he was now so used to conjuring to his mouth. He quickly cleaned his plate, washed it, and stowed it away into the cabinet. He picked up his bag and walked towards the door. He turned and surmised the apartment for a moment. It looked as though no one lived there. So clean and austere. He turned and exited the domicile, walking towards the sound of gathering voices.
The main gate to the Uchiha complex was always the first place to become busy in the morning. He briskly walked towards the main village with a slight smile on his face. It was warm today and he enjoyed the pleasant weather. He waved at the other Uchiha children who were walking parallel to him, about fifty feet away. Some waved back, mostly the youngest. The others retained their cold and demure states as they were undoubtedly taught by the other members of the Uchiha clan. Naoe continued to walk quickly. He didn't want to be late for his first day. He took one last glance at the other children who turned towards the academy. They seemed to give him interested looks as he turned towards the training fields instead. He smiled to himself a little bit and tried to decide if he should wave goodbye to them. He stood for a moment with his back turned. He finally decided that he should say goodbye, but as he turned around, the children were already halfway down the street, going the opposite way. He would have to wait for another day to make friends with them. That was ok. He continued down the road, basking in the sun and wondering what his first day had in store for him.::


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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Naoe Kanetsugu (WIP)   Sun Mar 28, 2010 3:56 pm

Okay.....

1. There is no such thing as an "Elementalist." We aren't in a Dungeons & Dragons Setting here okay?

2. Your not allowed to have a Style yet, that's for S-Ranked Only.

3. Give more on the Pre-Academy Arc. I know your only a Genin, but still, there is like almost nothing there. =/

4. When this does get approved, I suggest you go into the Team Request Section and apply for Team KC.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Naoe Kanetsugu (WIP)   Sun Mar 28, 2010 9:05 pm

1)Alright, where are the specializations listed? How do I find what they are?

2)Alright.

3) What would you suggest putting in the history of a kid up to the age of 6-7? Nothing special really happens to them.

4) Alright.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Naoe Kanetsugu (WIP)   Mon Mar 29, 2010 3:27 am

I put the specialities in the template, but they are: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, Medical Ninjutsu (can only be used at Chuunin rank), Fuuinjutsu (can only be used at Chuunin rank) and Puppetry. You can pick two, a main and a sub.

I suggest putting in the history about some things that would affect a kid's life, like moving away, having some family die. Something with an impact which makes them what they are today.
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