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 Sora Mariko~ B-Ranked Genin of Konoha

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PostSubject: Sora Mariko~ B-Ranked Genin of Konoha   Sun Mar 28, 2010 3:56 pm

Name: Mariko, Sora
Nickname: N/A
Age: 16
Date of Birth: August 18
Chinese Zodiac: Snake
Gender: Female
Clan: NONE!

Looks:

https://i.servimg.com/u/f66/14/86/91/33/nayru11.jpg

Above is Sora when she is in battle, and her everyday outfit.

https://i.servimg.com/u/f66/14/86/91/33/chiats10.jpg

Above is her inside demon.


https://i.servimg.com/u/f66/14/86/91/33/f10.png
Because she has Chiatsu inside of her, she has the mark above on her forehead.


Personality: Sora is a very calm and nice person. She normally is very quiet, but can be loud. While on a mission she normally tries to focus on the goal of the mission. When her demon takes over, she tends to go wild. She doesn’t have any friends, so she is mostly depressed all of the time. Most people don’t like her because she is a Jinchuriki host. She misses the old days when people didn’t know she had a demon inside of her. She always is in a awkward mood. Also she gets outrageously crazy when she is in her Bijuu form.


Clan Information: none


Rank Information
Rank: B- Ranked Genin
Village: Konoha

Skill Information
Skill Speciality:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinity: Wind, Water
Special Characteristics:
~Because her 5 Tailed Beast has all off the elements, she has all of the elements. But only mastered the wind element, and the water element. She doesn’t even know that she can use every element.

Jutsus

Wind Jutsus

Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, Orochimaru will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.

Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Nagato will send a strong gust of wind towards his target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.

Name: Renkuudan - Drilling Air Projectile
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Renkuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. The user inhales a large amount of air into his chest and then slams his fist into his chest to expel it. When expelled it forms concussive spherical projectiles capable of inflicting large damage.

Name: Dai Kamaitachi - Great Cutting Whirlwind
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Dai Kamaitachi is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Sand ninja Temari. Named after a mythical creature, Temari uses her fan to blow a concussive wind that is imbued with her chakra. This technique is a bigger version of the normal Kamaitachi no Jutsu, having the ability to cause a great amount of cutting damage to the nearby area. This requires a fan.

Name: Senpuu Hashira no Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: This encircles the opponent with a spiral of wind, then the wind starts to rotate and is focused in rotating more and more fast. Once the opponent is imprisoned inside the spiral, the user can add projectiles, which will also encircle the opponent, effectively cutting them. That can make this jutsu deadly. This requires a fan, and will last one post.

Water Jutsus

Name:Mizurappa - Violent Water Wave
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Description:Suiton • Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent.

Name: Mizu Shuugou no Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
This jutsu allows the user to gather water from the environment around him, like from the air, soil, etc. However, if in dry lands, this jutsu is useless.

Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.

Name: Taihoudan - Large Projectile
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Taihoudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Elements. Amachi will generate water in his mouth and spit it as a stream at his target.

Name: Teppoudama - Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Teppoudama is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, the user manifests a large amount of water in his mouth which he can then spit at his opponent as a large spherical projectile.

Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.

Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however; it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Izumo will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows Izumo or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.

Name: Hahonryuu - Destruction Torrent
Rank: C - S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Hahonryuu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. To use this technique Yamato will generate water to use against his opponent. Depending on the amount of chakra put into the technique is how much water will be generated.


Name: Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Kisame will expel water from his gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water. Being from the Water Country, Kisame is at home with this type of jutsu. He can control the water by riding on top of the waves.


Taijutsu

Name: Konoha Reppuu
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Description: A counter attack in which the ninja uses a low spinning kick on the ankles to make its enemy fall while they are running, using their momentum against their opponent.

Name: Konoha Senpuu
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Description: A 360º spinning kick on the air in which the user will attempt to send an enemy flying.

Name: Konoha Shoufuu
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Description: A rising kick that has the enemy’s chin as a target, used to disarm or rising him up for an air combo. The user will lower their body before performing the kick, allowing them to launch the enemy more efficiently.

Name: Konoha Kage Buyou
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Description: A technique often used after Shoufuu, the user will move at high speeds below an opponent as they're in the air, as if becoming their shadow. Because the move is used so quickly after the enemy is launched into the air, it gives them no time to counter, allowing the user to proceed to strike with ease.

Name: Konoha Dei Senpuu
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Description: This jutsu is the evolution of the Senpuu, in which the user performs an even more furious 360º kick that moves at insane speed, making it faster then Senpuu and better served to react to enemies.

Name: Dynamic • Action
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: 5 m
Element: -
Description: Dynamic Action is a taijutsu technique. A ninja will launch themselves at an opponent and then use a barrage of strikes and kicks.

Name: Hayabusa Otoshi - Peregrine Falcon Drop
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Description: Hayabusa Otoshi is a Taijutsu technique. While at an elevated position, a ninja will grab his opponent from behind. Firmly locking himself to their back, they will lock his ankles to their neck to get their body rigid. They will then plant them head first into the ground. Essentially a belly to back piledriver, the move can provide a great concussion to their opponent's head.

Name: Dynamic • Entry
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Description: Dynamic Entry is a taijutsu technique. A ninja will often throw a kunai to distract his targets attention (though not necessary), he will then use his/her speed and agility to quickly approach and attack his/her opponent from their blind side.

Name: Konoha Gouriki Senpuu
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Description: The final evolution of Senpuu, the user will rotate even more furiously by gathering chakra into their limbs before striking, making the spinning blows not only lightning fast but packing quite a bunch. An ideal move against multiple enemies.

Name: Konoha Raiken
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Description: The user will use this while in mid-air, beginning to spin at high speeds in order to obtain a furious momentum before driving down upon an enemy with a rotating fist.


History and Roleplay Sample

History:

Childhood Arc:

Sora was born at the wrong time. There was a very horrible war going on. Than during the war a beast came out of the ground. It’s tails had all of the elements. So the people of Konoha tried to stop the beast, but dramatically failed. So the Hokage told the people not to worry, the next born baby would have the beast put into them. After that was said, the Hokage got news that a baby was born. The Hokage ran there to see the baby. It was Sora. She was just born, and was perfectly healthy. The Hokage went out to fight the beast, but than put it into a seal scroll. The Hokage ran back to the hospital, and put the beast inside of Sora. Sora grew up with people she thought was her family, but turned out to be the Hokage. So when the Hokage died. She was next in line. She was three years old when the Hokage died, but didn’t want to be Hokage. She told her so called mother to give it to the smartest woman in the village, and than that’s when the next Hokage was found. Sora grew up thinking everything was alright with her life, until her 5th birthday. She was swinging on a swing, when she was pushed off by a Chuunin. She got really mad, than attacked. She than saw that there was a awkward color going around her body. She felt like she was dieing. Her skin hurt. She almost killed the boy, and that is when she found out she was a beast. She later found out that her family got rid of her because she had a demon inside of her. She was told that she has to go to the Academy so she did.

Academy Arc:
(Not very long, because it wasn’t a very entertaining part of her life.)
Sora hated her life. She knew that people hated her, so she hated them. She didn’t have any friends, so she was lonely. She hated going to her classes, everyone stared at her. She also hated going to her own home because they were all ashamed of her. So when they heard she was doing the best in the academy, they thought she was lying. She was taught by a very generous man, that she didn’t know the name of. He thought she was unique for who she was.

Genin Arc:

TO BE CONTINUED!!!!

Rp Sample:

Her stomach grumbled. Even the smallest of snacks would make Sora go seasick 2 minutes in the water. But the stomach had won the debate as she willingly pulled out a granola bar from her bag. The lack of people gave this place a somewhat eerie feeling as Sora put the wrapper in her bag rather than burying it underneath the sand. "Well, there goes an hour of swimming." she said to herself, taking a bite. It was about 10am, and the sun was the most dangerous during noon hour. Perhaps she'd just stay on shore for the time and play some Death VOLLEY BALL EXTREME!™️.

The sound of a feint thud slowed her chewing down. Apparently, the lifeguard had fell from his high porch and onto the sandy shore. "Sorry, he's not competent enough to protect the lives of such charming young women and their less than charming dates. But don't worry, I've got it. He'll be out cold for...ohhh...three or four hours minimum." She was a meter too far to see what happened, but from the sounds of it, some egotistical man (probably his friend) had taken over. He didn't seem much of a man, let alone a lifeguard. 'Another reason not to go in the water.' Sora thought to herself, looking away.

"Oh, I forgot to introduce myself, I am Kokiki, Shara, Jounin of the Village Hidden in the Mist. I received an invitation to arrive, so I have, Mizukage-sama was busy so I am here in his stead." A Kiri-nin in Konoha? 'That's a laugh.' Sora didn't think Kiri wasn't much of a country, not many dared to come in Konoha. Maybe it was time to play around again. With one last bite, Sora got up and walked over to the lifeguard


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PostSubject: Re: Sora Mariko~ B-Ranked Genin of Konoha   Sun Mar 28, 2010 4:03 pm

Okay a few things:

1. The whole Elemental affinities thing...Don't make it where she can utilize every element outside of Bijuu form. Even high ranked Jounin are only capable of 2, at max. Kakashi was the only one able to use more than 2 because he had the Sharingan. So make it where she knows 1 or 2 elements right now and is able to utilize a different element for each tail she exerts. Later on when she's a higher rank she can slowly learn the new elements.

2. SERIOUSLY tone down the amount of Jutsu. She may be B-Ranked, but she's also a Genin, with that many shes way beyond A-Ranked which isn't even plausible for a Genin. So take off some, we don't need her too powerful right off. X_x;
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PostSubject: Re: Sora Mariko~ B-Ranked Genin of Konoha   Sun Mar 28, 2010 4:04 pm

FIXED!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Sora Mariko~ B-Ranked Genin of Konoha   Sun Mar 28, 2010 4:09 pm

I edited out your academy jutsus for you so it looks shorter, Academy Jutsus are universal so everyone knows them and don't need to be listed.

The academy Arc could have been longer though, but I'll get pretty liberal with you on that.

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