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 Uchiha Geretsu (Finished)

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NewIllusionist
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PostSubject: Uchiha Geretsu (Finished)   Fri Mar 26, 2010 8:49 pm

Name: Uchiha Geretsu (Mean)
Nickname: none
Age: 27
Date of Birth: 7/17
Chinese Zodiac: Horse
Gender: Male
Clan: Uchiha

Looks:

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Personality:

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Clan Information

(please post this separately in Clan Creation also please. your clan won't be approved with your character, it has to be done aside from this)

Clan Name: Uchiha
Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan (Copy Wheel Eye)
Clan Symbol:
Clan History:
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Link:

Rank Information
Rank: A-ranked missing shinobi (Technically Jounin)
Village: Formerly Konohagakure (Marked for Death on sight)

Skill Information
Skill Speciality:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Genjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Katon, Raiton, Doton, Suiton (in order from Strongest to weakest)

Special Characteristics:

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Jutsus
(please note: use the same template for every jutsu)

Name: Sharingan (Copy-wheel eye)
Type: Doujutsu
Rank: - (K.G.)
Element: -
Description:
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Academy/Genin Skills

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Chunin skills

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Jounin skills:

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ANBU skills

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(You can also use Canon jutsu from the list also found in Character Creation)

Styles
(remember: only S ranked characters may have their own style. all other characters must have an approved style or none until they can learn it)

Name: Battoujutsu
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: The art of drawing a blade to kill one or several foes. Battoujutsu includes techniques for attacking the opponent with the blade straight from the sheath and with an unsheathed blade. The style is known for its fast, straight-forward nature. Skilled practitioners can make their blades appear as no more than a flash.

Weapons
(please note: this template is for weapons that are unique to your character. Kunai and Shurikan are standard ninja tools and do not need to be mentioned apart from the amount of these items that you have)

Name: Sadaka Keiro (Definite path)
Appearance: A Katana with an angular black hilt and a blue steel blade. It is held in a black saiya (sheath)
Rank: D
Special Abilities: None, aside from the qualities of a well-forged blade.
Origin: The blade was commissioned to be forged by Geretsu's father when Geretsu was training as a young man to become a member of ANBU. Geretsu was unable to use it in his service, as it would expose his identity. However, the blade came to have a bloody story (explained in history).

Shinobi tools-
Sealed into left arm:
25 shuriken
1 Fuuma shuriken
3 spools of steel wire
10 kunai knives

Sealed into right arm:
25 shuriken
1 Fuuma shuriken
3 spools of steel wire
10 kunai knives

In gullet:
4 senbon needles

Tucked into pockets and folds:
12 explosive tags
2 flash bombs
2 smoke bombs

History and Roleplay Sample
History:

Pre-academy arc:
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Academy arc:
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Genin/Chunin exam arc: (This is the longest arc)
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Chunin arc:
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Jounin arc:
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ANBU arc
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Leaving Konoha arc:
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Hunting Geretsu arc:
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Chasing the Gold arc:
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Duel with Ishida Idono:
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Face to Face with Tenzen
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Present
Geretsu's meeting with Tenzen was the last time a shinobi from Konohagakure saw Uchiha Geretsu. Tenzen has not spoken about it, and Geretsu is believed to be dead. He now wanders around the western countries searching for assassination contracts.












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Last edited by NewIllusionist on Sat Mar 27, 2010 2:30 pm; edited 4 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Geretsu (Finished)   Sat Mar 27, 2010 7:09 am

Ummmm first off you need to put more on your history, because your saying that you want to be A-Ranked Missing Ninja, but your history isnt long enough. Work on that.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Geretsu (Finished)   Sat Mar 27, 2010 1:23 pm

It's finished. Any grievances?
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Geretsu (Finished)   Sat Mar 27, 2010 1:49 pm

NewIllusionist wrote:
(Kindly to the staff: I realize that these descriptions of Geretsu are sparse, but this is done for the reason of character. In my mind, a good villain is one that simply cannot be understood. I intend the only reference point for understanding Geretsu to be the ways his actions are perceived by individuals. I hope that you find this acceptable. Also, my browser and computer are outdated, and images often pose problems. The image is at the bottom.)

It doesn't matter if you want it to be a 'secret.' Just cause its not known IC, doesn't mean it can't be known OOC. So please add more on that.

Other than that I see nothing else wrong other than your 'Pre-Academy' Arc could be long but eh, I'll get liberal with you on that cause the rest of your history is pretty good.

So fix that one thing and your good.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Geretsu (Finished)   Sat Mar 27, 2010 2:31 pm

Will that be sufficient?
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Geretsu (Finished)   Sat Mar 27, 2010 2:32 pm

Approved. Very Happy
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